Wednesday, 26 February 2014


We are learning to edit here is our WALT!

We had to find a post that we could make better. I have chosen the post below. I think that this post could have my working out as well as the answers. I think that my audience would like to see that here is my old post.

What do you think that I could do better at to improve this post leave a comment. Here is the new post that I think is better...

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