tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post9138917536112155365..comments2015-11-26T14:46:28.540+13:00Comments on Isabella's Portfolio: WritingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post-3813208172795707842014-03-19T11:06:45.410+13:002014-03-19T11:06:45.410+13:00A good start here Bella. I think you need to look ...A good start here Bella. I think you need to look again at the Task set as you have given us a recount of the start of camp but have not really focussed in on one experience and kept us in suspense. I look forward to your second draft! Mum.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16552618017654258412noreply@blogger.com