tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post7174569873506797542..comments2015-11-26T14:46:28.540+13:00Comments on Isabella's Portfolio: Writing sampleUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post-4826859511535448372015-06-13T14:12:35.660+12:002015-06-13T14:12:35.660+12:00Bella, you have shown an excellent understanding o...Bella, you have shown an excellent understanding of how to use complex sentences and it shows in the detail you have crafted for your reader. I always really enjoy reading your writing as you have a unique way of capturing the reader by using personal voice and descriptive language. I look forward to reading more of your pieces. Next step? Hmm a tough one given that I know you already know that sorting out simple writing features is something you need to do and are already trying to do that.Troy Duckworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05604395648875507690noreply@blogger.com