tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post6501851291048931661..comments2015-11-26T14:46:28.540+13:00Comments on Isabella's Portfolio: Camp Writing 3rd draftUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208591346764143254.post-78926919306155495782014-03-20T22:07:14.464+13:002014-03-20T22:07:14.464+13:00Bella, what a beautifully written piece! Well done...Bella, what a beautifully written piece! Well done! You have really drawn me in as a reader... I couldn't stop. You have followed the success criteria closely and have a brilliant piece of writing as a result! I loved your opening paragraph - your anecdotal notes are hilarious! Maybe you could end with "even though my feet are planted firmly on the ground, my head was still up in the clouds"? Or something to that effect...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com